Wednesday, April 17, 2013

The spooky scary weird house

Once upon there was a tree and a man.This man was walking down the street. He saw a humongous tree he said to himself' "I should walk down and have a look" So he did.Then  walked and walked then he heard a sound  a creepy sound .Then he saw a bridge and then he stood on the bridge then he fell on the ground then he said ouch!  He had a look inside the tree then his stomach was rumbling and he got so hungry.So he ate apples kiwi fruit and jam sandwich's and he had lemon fizzy drink for his lunch. 
So he fell asleep. The End

This my draft copy and if I have missed anything or mistakes wrong can you please comment,  please.

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