Friday, May 10, 2013

Green leaves

                                       Raining leaves falling from the autumn trees.

                                          Smooth leaves, crunchy leaves fall on the ground.

                                                 Like a zig zag and floating on the ground.

                                                        Leaves playing with them and they will always 

                                                            Be happy.

                                                                                    

                     

 
 
 

                                                                             From Zaric

 
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  1. Powerful Learners in Room 7!May 27, 2013 at 5:41 PM

    Dear Zaric

    Wow!you have an amazing poem that describe the autumn leaves.I also like the word Zig-Zag,Zig-Zag is a interesting word to describe the autumn poem.What is autumn all about.
    From Nan

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  2. UnknownMay 28, 2013 at 7:53 AM

    Hi Zaric,

    You have used lots of interesting words there in your poem. I really enjoyed reading it

    From Mum

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  3. UnknownMay 28, 2013 at 7:54 AM

    Awesome choice of words there Zaric Rameka. I really enjoyed reading your poem.

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  4. Powerful Learners in Room 7!June 6, 2013 at 12:14 PM

    To Nan

    Thanks for commenting on my autumn leaves poem.And for saying that my poem describes the Autumn leaves.

    Zaric

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